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Looks like somebody needs to take advantage of Sera's G.I. Bill equivalent!

This comic is a collaboration between me and . I draw what he writes.

Previously:

Page 1: [link]
Page 2: [link]

Next:
Page 4: [link]
To be continued.

Some background info: [link]

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:icondestroyer77:
That is one dangerous garden with seeds of evil and such..

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:iconpsycoticneko:
Very hilarious! I hope the rest of the comic is just as funny. X3 *faves*

And is that red thing stalking Baird?? lol

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:iconchemicalalia:
Thanks! Haha, I think the whirlm's in love.
:iconsonicgundam:
XD

hilraious comic . especially the end were Macrus doesn't know how to write.

Very well dones series. You should keep up with this :3

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:iconpsycoticneko:
You're welcome!! lol I think its plain confused at the moment... though that would make a funny image.... :plottiing: hmm... :giggle:

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:iconspitfireshepherd:
LOL, looking great so far :D

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:iconthebourgyman:
:music: Sowing the Seeds of War! :music:

You never cease to impress me with your abilities, Mrs. H. This is an excellent comic, with a great overall graphic touch as always, going along well with *Faded-Myth's writing!

There are a few minus that I think should be worth mentionning though : your panels give the impression they're made of separate drawings that have been put together for the purpose of the comic. That gives the whole page a 'collage' look. Sometimes it works, but I don't think it works here (nor if it was intended?). Also, the difference of 'style' between the edge lines of your panels, the narration boxes and the drawn content of each panel themselves is quite perceptible, adding to the 'collage' impression (the shaky edge panel lines, the clean and soft lines of the drawings and the straight and angular aspect of the narration boxes make the whole thing look "heterogene" to a warned eye). What you could do next time is trying to make your drawing more 'rough' in order to make it fit with the shaky edges. Or you could go the other way around by softening your panels edges, too.

But that's a minor aspect that will probably go unnoticed by most of people reading the comic. Hope you didn't mind the critique.

I'm looking forward for the next installement!

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:iconhooligans87:
This is hilarious! Can't wait for more!

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:iconspacecowboy76:
God Damn Fudge Hogs!

They're everywhere!
They're crawling under the floors.
That's it man, game over man.
Game Over!

Come and get it you bastards!
Come on, you too!
Oh, you want some of this?
You want some too?

BRRRATTATATATTTT!
:iconfaded-myth:
The separated panels was my idea, as I gave Shay a rough thumbnail sheet with a possible setup, so I'm to blame here. I have to say though that I kinda like this look. But that's just me =P

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